Dissertation on Retail Business
Hello, I would need some help in editing my draft dissertation as I unfortunately failed. I attached also my supervisors comments before and after submission. I didn’t write enough to satisfy my supervisor and he said I missed a lot of information he advised me to write. How much would it cost for someone to editing my current attached dissertation (I can work on the same one and re-submit again) and write everything my supervisor advised me as there is a lot of missing information.The dissertation contains 7000 words it has to be 10%+/-, , however I prefer at least to show it to my supervisor if he would be happy about it.

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The subject is regarding Tesco in the UK not USA. Thank you.