Respond to a peer’s comment on Nuñez’s story. Did he/she establish a clear connection between a main point in the conclusion and a body paragraph in the story? Also comment on your classmate’s paragraph about a first job. Does it read like a concluding paragraph? Why or why not? If not, how could it be revised to be more clearly an ending paragraph?
- Post an initial response to both parts of Post 1.
- Post a response to one of your peers.
- Post on two different days.
- Length: Post 150 words minimum.of 5- 7 sentences
- Post your word count at the end of your post.
- Use quotations from the literature to support your points.