Respond to a peer’s comment on Nuñez’s story. Did he/she establish a clear connection between a main point in the conclusion and a body paragraph in the story? Also comment on your classmate’s paragraph about a first job. Does it read like a concluding paragraph? Why or why not? If not, how could it be revised to be more clearly an ending paragraph?

  • Post an initial response to both parts of Post 1.
  • Post a response to one of your peers.
  • Post on two different days.
  • Length: Post 150 words minimum.of 5- 7 sentences
  • Post your word count at the end of your post.
  • Use quotations from the literature to support your points.